You can never cry,
When it's raining.
You can never laugh,
When it's too loud to hear.
You can never smile,
When no one's looking at you.
You can never be happy,
When everyone else is sad.
These aren't the opinions of others,
They're facts.
They all have one thing in common.
You can never do them,
When all life is gone,
And no one knows your life was there.
-Sig
When it's raining.
You can never laugh,
When it's too loud to hear.
You can never smile,
When no one's looking at you.
You can never be happy,
When everyone else is sad.
These aren't the opinions of others,
They're facts.
They all have one thing in common.
You can never do them,
When all life is gone,
And no one knows your life was there.
-Sig


4 Comments:
This is veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!
Much better than mine, anyways!
i disagree with everything said in this poem, but i still like it.
i think the C.G. and Urxan ones are slightly better, since we're comparing.
i like it, though can we read some happy stuff though?
!@#$bubbles!@#$
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