Beyond the darkness,
Is there hope,
Beyond the darkness,
Is there joy,
Beyond the darkness,
Is there happy souls,
Beyond the darkness,
I wish I was there.
-Lama
Is there hope,
Beyond the darkness,
Is there joy,
Beyond the darkness,
Is there happy souls,
Beyond the darkness,
I wish I was there.
-Lama
posted by Urxan at 12:45 pm
4 Comments:
Great poem Lama!
i don't like it.
Well then you're an EEJIT! I like it. Why don't you re-write it so that you do like it too? I can change the post to how you adjust the poem?
Gwe Lee
questions marks missing.
grammatical error - 'are', not 'is'. do you see?
well done though.
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